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Well, Malik was getting ready and Odion rushes in and says: "MALIK!!!" "What?!" Malik yells as he is putting on his tux. "What are you doing tonight?" Asked Odion. "Well, if you must know I have a date with Ann." "Who is Ann?" Said Isis. "Urg... my date" Said Malik with annoyance. "Grrr" "Hey I heard of an Ann...I heard that she is a tomb robber." Said Isis. "Ya right... just because we are waiting for the pharaoh does not mean I can't have a love life...shesh dad got married didn't he?" Asked Malik "Well, he um...got pre chosen a wife by his father. He said that it was because of his anger and scariness..." Answered Isis. "Well, I know that she is not a tomb robber. Gosh!" Exclaimed Malik. "What the heck happened to Odion?" Asked Isis. " I AM OVER HERE!" Shouted Odion in the bathroom. "Freak...." Said Isis and Malik together. "What was that?" Said Odion. "NOTHING!" Shouted Malik and Isis. A few minutes later Ann arrived at the door. "Wow is this your tomb?" Asked Ann. "Um ya...nothing special..." Said Malik .. "See ya later...bye" And Malik walked out the door. " I don't trust her lets spy on them." Said Isis. "NO!" Screamed Odion. "Why not?" Asked Isis. "Because Malik needs love." Answered Odion. "Well, I am whether you want me to or not." So Isis walked out of the door. At the restaurant. "Where are we?" Asked Ann. "Um.... well, we are at a bowling ally." "WHAT?" Screamed Ann. " I don't have very much money..." Said Malik "I have a good idea, how about we go to your tomb." Said Ann. "But, my brother and well, probably only my brother is there but, none the less my brother is there." Said Malik "Oh well, we can look around your tomb." "Wow, I have done that too many times and besides, I probably should not..." Said Malik. "PLEASE?" Said Ann with these chibotic eyes. "Fine..." Said Malik when they got there. "So I have a favor to ask you" Said Ann. "What" Said Malik as he was looking around the room. "Stand still." Said Ann. Malik thought that he was going to get his first kiss but, she tied him up in ropes. "What the heck?!" Screamed Malik "Well, I am a tomb robber and I need the tomb keeper to be gone."Said Ann. Isis runs into the scene and helps Malik. "Ok Ann this is your final tomb, prepare to be Mummified." Said Isis. "Aww man Isis don't say that..." Said Malik disturbed. So they killed Ann and as they were walking home Odion was being put on a stretcher. "What the heck what happened Odion?" Odion Screams "The cookies where are my burnt cookies?" The hospital guy Said. "Well, he burnt his hands grabbing the cookies..." "I am going to my room. Good luck Odion." Said Malik walking out. So Isis joined him at the hospital and told Odion the whole story. "Wow." Said Odion... "I hope that Annakildia goes well.." Said Odion "WHAT?!" Screamed Isis
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